Even though on some level I like the way this version feels, the abundance of high-contrast grey bars was painful to look at printed at full size. I changed the color scheme for the final version to light on dark, and decreased the contrast between the bars corresponding to "out of season" and the background, allowing the positive data points to stand out. I also edited the headline to be more literal, though in retrospect i prefer the mystery of the original.
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